Wednesday, June 1, 2016

Follow up task

 Russel felt really tired because he had to swim 8 hours to land and not stoping also he must of felt thirsty and hungry.he must of been happy when he felt the coral. Also he was really brave because he swam for 8 hours and he was not worried and keeped swimming.  i would of felt scared and worried.
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  1. Sarah JensenJune 6, 2016 at 3:24 PM

    Thanks for your post Aaron. I agree with you that Russel must have felt exhausted and thirsty, I can't imagine swimming for that long!
    Remember to re-read your writing every time you write something. Check that you have put capital letters in the right places. Also try to add a bit more detail to your writing.

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